Writing 3 FCE

You have watched a Youtube video about the problem of computer game addiction in children. Your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view. (140-190 words)
Notes:
1-bad grades at school
2-no social life
3- (your own idea)

More and more young people are getting addicted to playing computer games and we need to help them to overcome this addiction. There are several points to consider.

To begin with, playing computer games all the time can affect the grades at school. If they spend all the day with the computer, they won’t have enough time to study or to do homework so that they will have worse grades at school.

Another big problem of this addiction is that they prefer being in front of the screen than going out with their friends. As a consequence, they will lose friends and they will be alone with the computer, they won’t have social life, which is very important at this age.

In addition, they could have health problems since they don’t do exercise and they usually eat snack whereas they are playing. They could have problems on the eyes too because of the light of the screen during a long time.

I think they should play only in their free time and they will be able to do more exercise or to study for the exams. We should tell them that having a social life is very important at this age.